I find that I identify most with Perchik because I value an education and I am always looking to change things and make them better. Both Perchik and I have our eyes open in the sense that we are watching and listen to how others view us and we improve the situation accordingly. We are both also headstrong in getting others to understand why our idea has so many pros, even if it is tainted with cons. When Perchik leaves for Kiev to find for what he believes in he expresses a difference between us for he is far braver than I could ever be.
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